Kia Ora Leo, I like the poem it rhymes really good, I like the part when you said " Bright sunny day sweating from the sun" it rhymes and its tru in life so keep up the good work.
hey leo amazing work, I really like the way you made your poem sound so realistic and all the creative words that really makes it sound great,I really enjoyed your poem, keep up the hard work.
Talofa Lave Leo, What a lovely poem!, I like the way you described about having fun at school on the filed and then ending with washing you feet at the taps. Kai te Pai, Keep up the good work!!
Hi Leo I like your poem because I like to run fast on the field to and wash my feet at the end of the day.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Leo, I like the poem it rhymes really good, I like the part when you said " Bright sunny day sweating from the sun" it rhymes and its tru in life so keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Leo I like your poem because it relates to me at lunch time and i like to run fast as well
ReplyDeletehey leo amazing work, I really like the way you made your poem sound so realistic and all the creative words that really makes it sound great,I really enjoyed your poem, keep up the hard work.
ReplyDeleteTalofa Lave Leo, What a lovely poem!, I like the way you described about having fun at school on the filed and then ending with washing you feet at the taps. Kai te Pai, Keep up the good work!!
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